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Dusk. Straight answer, wasn't it? -Tov When you can see the sun, dawn. You don't see it much - above the baron's damned 'scrapers and the sky's dull, smog. -Piers ...

Always good, alliteration. ^_^ I'd almost not know what to expect of a German titled story - though that's an impression neutral if not good - but it's one I'd ...

Stolen?... Ha - why would I do that? or answer. Means yes. Probably. Right? -Tov It was bloody inadvertant; and... Hell, it wasn't like a drifter, or Tov. -Piers --- ...

I like the name 'Kiens' -- and the title, all in all, is simple in a good way. It seems to set itself well on what it is without any ...

I'm fond of language -- and I've always liked the sound of 'Taer'. It has an odd look, tear turned 'round and not quite, and a somewhat Gaelic sound as ...

It evokes a somewhat eastern image - Indian, because of 'caste'. Spider, in any title, always strikes me as Halloween-esque...sort of stale? But as it follows 'caste' it feels less ...

I liked that one the first time I was it. Illustrious comes to mind, but in the sense of illustrating as well the connotation to 'majestic'. It leaves a question ...

And that's entirely too difficult to consider without thinking of the actual story; that puts it in a different light, naturally. ^_^ Ah...perhaps I can recall what I thought when ...

I'm afraid it brings to mind novels of a rather trashy character. That's my first impression. Secondly, I think of a take-off of Gone With the Wind . 0o' But ...

As has been noted before, doubtless, a piece of poetry or fiction is not an excuse or a place to debate each other's critiques. Critique the work . Any more ...

Well, it is a re-read, to be precise. Peter Pan by J.M. Barrie And I suppose I'm reading drafts and scraps of Vetren'iy - which shouldn't count.

Ele makes a pertinent point. Moved .

If I were listening, right? I don't know. Ha - I'm not. Who wants to listen to the bloody mess the res make at night? -Tov ...Footfalls, outside I guess. ...

Oh, 'tis a good read...and I hadn't expected ghosts. You have a way with description that keeps it present and poetic, brushing abstract without fading into it. Which means I'll ...

Er, hey -- if I could see that far, wouldn't be here, right? Probably. Hell; or I could be dead. -Tov I'll be in the same place, likely as not, ...